Dear Readers,
Happy Wednesday! The time has come for me to share this week's poem with you!
Day Twenty Eight's Progress:
Today I kind of forgot about the other two poems I was working on yesterday and I focused on finishing a different one. This poem is the one I wrote about yesterday. I mainly did the first draft today since I didn't write much of this poem. Since I got the first draft done, on Thursday and Friday, I will just work on editing the poem and making slight changes. Let me know if you have any suggestions or feedback. Here it is:
Sugar Coated Concrete
What has been gloomy for several days
Is now powdered white perfume
Acting like a soft glaze.
I don’t want to acquire
The taste of bittersweet,
Though the rain
Is really dampening the spirits.
I listen to the sounds
of every old damaged car
or every nice and fancy car
that passes on me.
Careful, I shout
Stay cautious of the rain --
They don’t seem to hear
Louder and Louder
The rain thumps it’s feet on both the car and I --
Only one thing that we share in common
A place below these cold footsteps.
Hope you enjoyed it!
~ Golden Ink
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