Dear Readers,
As always, today is the day to share this week’s poems with you all!
Day Forty Eight's Progress:
Today I finished both first drafts of the poems. I just wrote down everything that came to me. I didn't make any edits yet. There are somethings I already know that I want to change. For some reason, I still can't decide which poem I want to keep working on. Maybe I will keep both, but, I think that I will work on them a little more before making a decision. Hope you enjoy reading them!
A Never Ending Loop
Picking and placing,
Picking and placing,
Picking and placing
Each crystal
At its designated spot.
Picking and placing,
line after line,
Crystal after crystal.
No time for breaks,
No room for mistakes.
One crystal out of line
And the whole piece,
Ruined.
One odd mistake,
And your world
Is shaken.
I thought,
you are supposed to learn
from your mistakes.
Maybe it's not acceptable anymore—
Daily Thoughts
Scattered soldiers
Waiting for their
Orders.
Bird's eye view—
they resemble nothing,
no clarity can be found yet.
Still learning their purpose,
Running around
try[ing] to see the bigger picture.
They travel through the nooks
And crannies of my brain.
Either they die in battle,
Or take over with too much power.
Surrender,
Or vanquish,
Always unpredictable.
You never know
If an idea is good or bad,
But,
you always know when it hits you—
right in the eyes,
the windows to your soul.
Do you have any feedback for me?
~ Golden Ink
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