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Attention: In Progress

Writer's picture: Golden InkGolden Ink

Dear Readers,


Happy Tuesday!


This Week’s Progress:

This week, I continued the first drafts of both poems. I worked on one of them more than the other which is why I will share it with you all today! In the span of this week, I am going to edit the poem with I shared with you all today, and I will continue to work on the first draft of the other poem. Please let me know if you have any suggestions for this poem! Here it is:


Eternal Hope


When you realize

That a fire couldn’t burn a rose.


That this fire

Burned a family’s

Happiness, purpose,

And hope-


But not a rose.

It couldn’t burn

Through the fire

Rising in the scarlet petals

Even when gasping for air. It couldn't burn a rose

When it silently watched

3 generations Of possessions and Heritage

Helplessly burn to the ground.

It’s a short poem, but it means a lot!

~ Golden Ink


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