Dear Readers,
Today is Wednesday! The day to share my poem with you all.
Day Forty Three's Progress:
Today I finished the first draft of the poem. I'm still not sure exactly if I like the poem. I feel like the stanzas don't go very well together. Let me know if you have any feedback for me. I think that I will keep working on it and if I still don't like it, I will wait a few days and come back to it. The phrasings also need to be edited so I will work on that on Thursday and Friday. Here is the poem:
A sac of Confidence
He sat there —
Sitting on a bench
With a glass half empty,
With his hand on his chin
He sat there thinking —
Or rather,
People watching.
He sat there pondering
Where is my self-esteem,
Why did it not ask for permission
Before going off on vacation?
He thought --
Confidence needs balance.
Confidence set me going like lottery
The chances are set to never --
But I never know,
There are always those that are lucky --
The ones who roam on the sidewalks,
Carrying a sac full of self-esteem,
Until it reeks of overconfidence.
Hope you liked it !
~ Golden Ink
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